[Businessmtg] Draft

[Alison Moore]

Hi.

I've read through the draft several times.

Where it says Al-Anon Literature, then CAL,

Well, perhaps it ought to state exactly what CAL stands for because if I were a newcomer, I'd not understand that acronym.
Maybe it can say
Here we use conference approved literature (CAL) to maintain the purity of the Al-Anon messages and principles.

Or something.

I needed it explained to me specifically

  1.
What on earth CAL stood for
  2.
Why we use CAL and not outside books and quotes
  3.
What happens when Al-Anon gets 'watered down'

Just my thoughts.

Alison