[Businessmtg] Draft

[Sandie Parkker]

Hello ASP biz friends.

Thank you Anne. Thank you Steve.
I have gone back and forth a few times between the draft and existing
introduction.  These are my first thoughts.

I like how the draft starts out with a thoughtful friendly introduction and
then moves into the welcome that I am familiar with when I attend meetings
and have chaired.

The draft seems comprehensive, but yet remains simple and not
overwhelming.  Two aspects I think are important to a newcomer when they
are getting their feet wet.

I will make a suggestion to add after the first sentence of the intro
something to the effect that you have just made your first choice for
serenity in your life by being here.

After all, this is is a program of learning how to think and choose
differently.  I may change this for better or different wording ......when
I first started I was not aware I even had choices to begin with. .....

In serenity,
Beverly