[Businessmtg] New Newcomer page draft

[Steve Rankin]

Hi folks,



Sorry for the delay; my Tuesday was booked solid so I just got a chance to
get to this.



The gist of it is that I ran across a Newcomer page somewhere, and thought
it was both (a) quite good, and (b) had numerous problems.  So, I started a
draft with a rough copy of that page, then made numerous corrections and
changes to better suit ASP.



Here is the link to the draft of the new newcomer page.



https://asp-afg.org/draft-welcome-to-a-serenity-place-al-anon-family-group/



A link to the current Newcomer page is below for comparison.

https://asp-afg.org/newcomers-beginners-to-al-anon/



It your turn to make comments, ask questions and offer suggestions.

I will try to address what comes up in this discussion, including
incorporating ideas into the draft as we go along.



Love and SERENITY,

Steve